Posted by fugitsu-blackhole
What I am about to say is not meant to be bad, but constructive criticism to let you know of the minor mistakes that you made.
First off, I'd say that the music isn't very good. Try something that's not so... well... bad. The slow motion didn't work very well, as I couldn't tell where the slow motion was beginning and where the lag was ending. Try to only include clips that really show off your skill also, it isn't very cool to see you make 3 shots at a guy and then for someone else to shoot him. Plus the one where you were on scoutzknivez wasn't very entertaining, just really boring. The ending shot at him wasn't very great or skillful because he was just standing there.
That's just a few things I'd say.
It's not bad for your first movie, however.
I said no Bad Commentz just good, i like it , its not urs and all my clan mems like it