I'd give it a five out of ten. To be honest, this was pretty bad.
Hear me out, you're on the right track, but you have a long way to go.
The main problems are these:
Music: it doesn't fit. I love the songs, but choose something else.
Kills: you chose badly. You show yourself missing, shooting stationary opponents, or team killing. Seriously, there's a team kill in there.
HUD: remove it.
Customization: it's not a good idea. For example, if you hadn't put the text into the video, I would not have known you were using an AWP.
Editing(-ish): the fast-forwarding and transitions aren't good. Although, the timing is very good.
Recently, I've been looking into what people like in frag videos because I'm making one. I guess I'm something of an expert on it? I don't know, but this is what people like.
BTW, my frag video will be awesome. :D As you all know, I am the God of digital video.
The shitty transition between music tracks made me want to barf.
The first song, while I do like the band, didn't fit worth a cock.
The frags are pretty crappy with little to no really clear skill involved except maybe a quick finger.
The servers are public.
You used custom skins.
You hosted it on Youtube.
The fast motion stuff sucks.
Lawl, my first video sucks.
Anyways, you could improve the video by adding some better effects such as fading in and out, better music, longer kill streaks, and uploading to a place other than Youtube...
Of course there is no in game sound, that's intentional... I missed 3 times throughout the whole video, but I didn't miss the same target twice and every missed shot was followed by a kill. I tried to match the music well, guess it wasn't so hot... and it was a editing glitch with the team kill involved... I will be editing and reposting soon with some of the suggestions...
Where else am I supposed to upload it other than youtube, i'm kinda new to this ^^
Thanks for all the positive feedback, as for the negative feedback... Blow me.
BTW I have played cal ^^ I don't have time for it now, but I plan on going again... The skins come and go rather quickly... I get tired of them and simply remove them and play normal quite often... I usually play clean ^^ thanks though!
Really guys, you are sticklers to what a video looks like. Yeah, i will admit that the song was not the best choice, but oh well. And acually how many of you didn't know that would be a awp? It's like the most popular awp skin.
Alright, you have some nice frags on there, i've seen better, but oh well. Your better than me. I'm working on a video right now, so i'll try.