Yes i agree the post of syrakuse! if its your 2. skin you dont need to make really great skins with colored bullets or something. make some simple things! they are easier to make for you and they looks better ! the textures are really good for a newbee :) some people with a much experience dont make so good textures so i wish you good luck !
What's funny is that when you look at the textures they're really good, it's the wacky logo and the yellowed bullet color that turns me off.
If this is your second skin, change the bullet color back and take the logo off and you'd be set brofo