You're getting closer. Its certainly looks better than the first iteration.
There's some inconsistency with the screenshots though, one shows a fairly decent shaped beard while the first one shows what seems to be version 1.
its very hard to tell the quality though, I suggest using thirdperson with mayamode in a well lit area.
Go to console, with sv_cheats 1, type thirdperson, then back your camera into a wall until its close up, type in the console thirdperson_mayamode 1 and turn around, you should be able to get a better screenshot that way.