Improvement! I see details preserved in this skin, very good! The rivets and places where metal is connected is still present, as well as logos and serial numbers. :)
Looks like you need to work on your texture export. I see a bit of odd shine when lighting hits, those 'lines of light'. You can fix this by experimenting with the 'alpha channel' of the texture to control shine.
Check the last post in this thread I made, it explains how to edit alpha channels.