Sure, i get your point, but the video on surf forbidden ways is just to get all the people to download the map. since that sun-effect-thing is stunning for most viewers, i've decided to put it in the spotlight. :)
Damn couldn't post for ages... here's for another go... XS (this is for your map it isn't letting me post)
Okay don't have time really for good feedback but here's just some points:
- Lighting is boring and whtie
- There doesn't seem to be any upper levels or lower levels making the map flat.
- As cheebs said, it needs more cover
- Background a little boring
- Skybox a little boring, I suggest you download one here.
Maybe some detail on the outer walls too...
Good work though so far, just doesn't look finished.
It isn't much of an internet fame type of thing, I'm just saying that this is what we do for almost any other submission on this website. There is always one of something unless it is completely closed down.
I'm just saying.
Take it or leave it, it's your choice. I'm just trying to save space. I can easily put the HTML from your tutorial into mine and credit you on it just to make a convenient mega-English tutorial.