Posted by manslayer111
Pros: The lighting is done very well.
The cyan color to parts of the map really set a good theme look to it and the HDR makes a big difference, it looks pretty good.
Also you have a fairly good design.
Cons: I strongly recommend you chance the file cabinets and shelves to something else, it doesn't make sense why they're there.
You have a pool theme and then the file cabinets...they need to go.
I can't suggest anything to you at the moment cause it's been way too long, but I'm sure you can find something.
Also, I am surely not a fan of the symmetrical design. Try and make the sides just a little different design-wise, not the props on each side, I mean like the walls and such.
Also, In my opinion you should lower the upper walkways.
Improvements: Not much that I can see.
Just make the props more fitting to this map.
Make the walls less boring, add some detail to them.
Notes: Not Bad.
I wll try to use different models in v2
About symmetrical design: I wanted it to make 50/50 - gameplay/reality, something like poolday. So I did not add more details.
Thanks for constructive feedback!
Posted by !n$pect0r
Thanks for constructive feedback! I wll try to make bumpmaps) Those textures were not yellow-green - they green, lol. It's because of lightning
You mean I need to remove HDR? I'll better try to optimize it)
Also I'm thinking of making v2. There will be second floor between the first floor and upper walkways. What do you think about it?
It's good that you will make some bump maps for it then, it will look pretty sweet. As for the HDR, I say keep it because it makes the map look so damn good. I think that a section in the middle would be nice if you can implement it well.
Let me know about a v2!