Posted by Nikrett
Thank you for this map. Nice work.
But, in my humble opinion, it's content is poor: yes, there are a lot of camping places and there a lot of good ones. But they all can be taken by one, single zombie without any help.
I suggest, for the start, to make some rooms in the hangar with refrigerators (or fuzzy drinks machine - there a lot of names for these things) and some wooden boxes in these rooms. People can hide there (rooms) for some time.
If this is a factory, it must have hoisting crane with parapets or something. You can see zm_littlecity_v6 for an example or some other maps, containing word "factory". If you have skill, I have no doubt, that you can make this crane move ^_^
Try to do anew room into one warehouse or depot with a lot of boxes with different levels (ye-ye, i am a box maniac xD). For an example, we can see zm_cbble (not orange) maps and some others.
I see, you also have a lot of trucks, haven't you? So, do you remember filders_green (sorry, but I don't remeber a version - I think, this is the last of them) and a truck near CT respawn point? There was a truck, full with the boxes. This truck was hard to capture, so zombies wasted lots of time to "eat" humans. I think, you should put one-pair of trucks like this on the map.
And the main problem, in my opinion, is that corridors are to wide and long. We remember, that zombies are much faster, than humans. So long range distances are good for marathone competitors, but not for ordinary people and zomibes. I suggest to cut this distances to the half. It will make this map smaller, but should help.
That's all for now.
P.S. Sorry, if I abused you or did something wrong to you. I've done everything to help you with an open, sincere heart.
P.P.S Sorry for my bad-bad English xD Russo Touristo, you know ^_^
P.P.P.S Thank you for the time, reading all this ^_^
Okay, I tested this on a server, and there was no lagg.( A real server)
Also please tell me where you played my map.
A crane is pointless, It distracts players and zombies, and often lags my fps( Could just be me)
There are only 5 trucks in my map.
And In servers like I3D zombies can't jump faster, or higher. That all depens on the server.
Thanks for the feedback. Aslong as you played on my map, and what you say is true.
It's hard for me to flame you.
I Like it if my map gets honest feedback.
but the crane, that's hard to fit nicely in my map, you can see how my building main two are built, and that would be hard to put one there.