Now. This is my Second map. it took 3 days to finish it and im really proud of it :D
Maybe you saw my first map. it was not a good map i think . but this map is in my opinion much better
than bei first map.
( Sorry for my English :x )
Pros: Very nice cruZeer. This map shows much improvement in your mapping skills compared to your first map. Way to go!
I'm really digging the layout. The way you designed the 3 different levels really flows together. The layout is not completely symmetrical but yet very balanced. Your brushwork is also very good.
Cons: For the most part you did a good job lining up the dev textures but there are some places that need some attention.
This is just a couple places but there are more. Also the gray dev texture you used is for displacements only. As it stands you have a textureBlend on a non-displacement surface.
Screenshot 4, I think you should add some crates in that area for some additional cover.
Notes: Imo I think the lighting needs to be a bit brighter. You should be very proud of this map. The items I described are very minor. Paying close attention to detail will make the difference between a good map and a great map. Good job cruZeer.