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Pros: -nicely scaled difficulty through entire map
-innovative jumps and creative jumps
Cons: -LEAKS! The water doesn't work because your map is not completely enclosed.
-textures are bland and restricted to grey and orange for most of the map
-the 7th jump cannot be complete
the lighting is a little too dark in areas
Improvements: Try adding more light entities to prevent patches of darkness. When you change the textures to create a richer atmosphere, a more consistent level of lighting will really make the map look better. As is, the textures and lighting detract from the map instead of add to it.
Also, I'm not sure if you forgot to add a teleport on the jump after the water because you can land on top of the opposite orange area.
Load Hammer and your map .vmf file. Go to Map and select Load Pointfile from the dropdown menu. If you construct a map properly, it should not have one. If you don't you will have one to load - like in this case - and a red line will show up in Hammer pointing to a whole in your walls. Keep doing that over and over again until you are done, and the water will work properly.
Notes: I'd like more jumps too.