Cons: Very primitive, Little to no cover, no lighting effects, only 4 very basic textures
Improvements: add way more cover, use lighting effects, use more textures so the map looks more lively.
Notes: This map is a complete failure, dont post maps for downlaod unless you believe it is well built, so I strongly recomend you spend much more time planing and designing your maps.
Well, you need to include some lighting in your maps. It really brings down the quality of any map if no lighting is included. It would also help to at least put a skybox at the top of your map, instead of a roof, especially when you have grass as the ground texture.
Textures aren't that good either, there are a total of four textures, all standard and pretty basic.
The brushwork is really simple, just a large rectangular room with a few spheres. try to put some more into your maps, I only see about five different spheres which is the only cover that is offered. Doesn't really leave much for fun gameplay.