Pros: Fun gameplay :D. Nice layout, original yet unique, somehow at the same time. Lol. :) And nice brightness.
Cons: Still blotchy lights, It'd be better to at least include sources of light :P (Light bulbs made of the prop_static entitie)
Improvements: See cons.
Notes: You're fat btw, And this is brilliant for a map you made after like a day with hammer.. ( Well final was longer than that, but the first one!)
Because he was blind and thought that the first two screens r the same
I added 2 more lights and the 2 side ramps also added m3's n middle and p90s on the tops of the ramps :)
oh i also forgot to say i added 2 side rooms also