Snow Map - North Waste Land

A Map for Half-Life 2

SnowMap-NWL

I have other maps for this but I was proud enough to release this one. Its not meant to be good and I only want constructive feedback on this on how to improve, bugs, etc...

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    5mo
    Actually, your map is not that bad, since it's playable with some sort of puzzles and quite balanced combat.

    Speaking of combat, if you give to the player the overcharged physcannon, there's no need to give other weapons.

    Don't use the same color, make some contrast in your maps. For example, try changing the "stairs" with darker textures.

    And finally, just practice a litle more with building skills and managing better Hammer Editor.

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    5mo

    Hi!

    I tried out your map and I managed to "complete" it, whitch means i got to the end of an empty corridor. I decompliled your map for studying purposes, to see if you missed out an ending trigger or something, but no, there is clearly nothing at the end. And I notice you don't use any NODRAW, and theres an open skybox.

    "Its not meant to be good" Please explain this one.
    Then this map meant to be look bad?
    Then you made a pretty good job.
    Here's why:

    • Basic blocky shapes, bland look and textures.
    • You start off  in a small room, where you get shot immidietly you load the map.
    • You are getting swarmed by enemy combines.
    • No story what so ever, no ending.
    • Floating combine tower.
    • With or Without AI? I don't understand, doesn't make any sence to play without AI.
    • Lights on the lamps are very intense.

    "I only want constructive feedback"
    I don't want to be mean or anything, but this map is bad.
    Try harder next time and don't relase stuff that is in the
    early indev alpha stage.

    What can you do?
    • Watch more tutorial videos and learn.
    • Make your map unique.
    • Spend more time on your map and don't rush.
    • And make it look more realistic.

    1.4

  • *Note: When I ask for feedback I don't mean say how bad it is, I mean for like people who know how to use Hammer better than me who can help me improve.
    Bananite
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    5mo
    Wait, it's an Episode 2 map?
    Also is this a joke?

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    THAT'S A LOTTA DAMAGE

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Snowing
Season
Winter
Time of Day
Daytime
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Small
Aesthetic
Default
Development State
Beta
Textures
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