This is my first map, well the first one that didnt turn out like crap thats good enough to upload to the internet. I feel I did quite well in it, but some constructive criticism would be nice.
just your standard small aim map, dust themed and outdoors. Its functional , there are no known gameplay problems or bugs, I wouldent have uploaded it if there were.
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Looks very well done, but some things should be improved.
Like Noddy said, the beams don't look realistic, it looks like they have no support, and the texture should be like the ones in De_dust.
The crates in the 3rd screenshot need some work, you should adjust the textures so they look more realistic and you should also consider making separate crates instead of just a huge brush like that.
Another thing is, in the same screenshot(3rd) there is the wall on the top, it looks very plain, you should consider adding some more decals, props and windows to it so that it looks like an actual building wall.
Other then that, great work man.
Nice lookin map, for the crates try using prop_statics and rotate them a bit to make them more realistic. If you still want to use brushes for the crates use the texture shift tool, because they seem to look a bit dodgy the way they are (the long group in screenshot 2) overall a nice looking map, good job 8/10
Nice map, but could be improved in a few places:
the beams in the first screenshot dont look very realistic - they would just fall down. Give them a wood texture or use a wooden prop.
The crates look kind of funny all together like that. Make them more haphazard, which could actually lead to more intersting gameplay where people shoot through the gaps left in between the crates.