Pros: I like the structure and design of your map.All details and props have a good place in your map.
Cons: I think your 3D skybox or your backround can be better ind your second version.Only 16 spawns ?? If you add 10 more I will be happy and more server will upload this map on there servers.A ambience_generic sound enity will be good in your map.The ambient shall be a nature sound,if you add this your map will be more realistic.
Improvements: I'm looking forward to see a fix version soon here on FPSbanana.I wish you good luck and don't forget !!! MAPPING IS REALLIFE !!!