Posted by battlemech7
Yes, its..okay> for a first map, but you need to use textures that blend with each other. And never..ever, make solid towering walls out of a tiny texture that will repeat itself when stretched out like you have.
And like brek said, you need to have cover! Use your prop entities!
Thank you FOR your Comments!
i uses a prop static in my new map i Will put it on here 2moorrow when it is done
Posted by RedyBrek
Pros: For a first map, you are making a good start, and you know, someone has to start somewhere.
Cons: The textures used are so odd, they do not mix in AT ALL. And it is far too open, even just some boxes on the floor would make this look so much better, and you would actually have some cover instead of standing in the open the entire time.
Improvements: Do some boxes on the floor, I think 64x64 is a good size if I remember correctly. Improve the textures, for example use an actual floor texture for the floor, and a brick texture for the walls etc etc.
Notes: I think that you should have held this map back and post some good WiPs and get some advice from it.
i cant wait im in a hurry to make the best maps before school starts so i have to make fast
i take your advice to my heart and i will use it on my next map but not my next fpsb map bc it is already done i think u will like it
Please Tell Me if you Put it on Your Server (i want to see)