Laser Gun

My first Model

Its my first model, and its in the starting.

Its bad now, but later i think it would be kinda good.

UPDATE 1 (6/15/12)

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    Posted 11 months ago

    Nice model keep it up but some stuff in the gun is kinda weird to me but it's still nice.. ;)

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    Posted 11 months ago

    Hmm...

    A concept is a concept, i know it's your first, so i'll let it slide...

    But here's the thing: you probably just use basic shape (a cylinder, a sphere, and a box) and edit it accordingly right? That really won't create a good quality model...

    The proper modelling technique is start with a plane, then use the Extrude by going along a reference picture that you have either drawn before or by using a picture of the thing that you wanted to model. (well, it doesn't have to be a plane though)

    Well, how about reading THIS tutorial before continuing? Or maybe THIS?

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    Posted 11 months ago

    Posted by MZ4

    Interesting.

    Grox would you help me ?

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    Posted 11 months ago

    Improvements:

    • Lol its detailless add more details or ask Grox to do it he is pretty good with that
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    Posted 11 months ago

    Some parts are way to low and others are to high poly the shapes are also very basic and just don't blend with each other correctly, if you've made it this far you've normally already have the final concept in mind so I suggest to redo everything and do a fresh start of everything!

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    Posted 11 months ago

    Interesting.

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    Posted 11 months ago

    Posted by flameomega

    I WILL ANIMATE THIS.

    :D thanks so much :D

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    Posted 11 months ago

    I WILL ANIMATE THIS.

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    Posted 11 months ago

    Posted by HazarD.

    Looks quite fucked up now..

    Guess you have some concept art on which this is based?

    yes have and it will be good someway

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    Posted 11 months ago

    Looks quite fucked up now..

    Guess you have some concept art on which this is based?

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