Aren't i ART?

art art art art

By EKAH 1 year ago

Haha first of all wow.. i couldn't find "FPSbanana" in the category box, got me confused now that it's changed. Guess i haven't made much noise in a while. To get to the point, i have made several Art threads here. Now It's gonna be a bit different. I'm making a school project and i need some feedback on this picture:

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http://ekah6.deviantart.com/#/d3c33jm

It's a concept and the props are of course fake. The assignment included that i needed to get written feedback by other people and use it and see if it improved it or made it worse. Now this is where you come in my fellow banana. <3 what do you say? give me some help?

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    U r art <3

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    Mini

    what r art?

    also as a different caption, I suggest God is Dead Life is a bitch Love will tear us apart Your are so fucked up

    Edit: Also you massive junky, so much heroin!

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    Still no quotes? thanks scouts!

    fuck yeah mini takes at least 20ml heroin to kill me.

    No-one dies a virgin, life scr
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    This is so weird I don't even know what to say...

    U R ART

    Now who woke up the dead?
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    Honestly I like it, it's kind of disgusting though but I assume it's what you aimed for.

    Otherwise I'd suggest ditching the text shadow, it looks really odd. Why? Because it's a unrealistic 2d text with no angles that produces a realistic shadow.

    I'd suggest to go for the clean look with the text, just the text and no realistic effects applied to it but if you want it to look like the text really is floating around in that room you should give it a bit depth aka make it look 3d but not by too much ofcourse.

    You could also cut out distracting items in the background like the tubes on the cupboard or that hanger like thing on the wall. This will increase the message and put more focus on the picture itself.

    Otherwise it's pretty good, I like the colours and the subtle "dirtyness" of the picture. That's what I think...

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    As some have saif I'd work on the text. Actual photography and posing is great. Perhaps a shadow gradient from bottom right to top left which could focus the viewer towards the subject.

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    i would change the phrase. It does not make sense "with mental disease" it should be "with A mental disease" or actually name a mental disease, what you have wrote is saying that he has a disease called mental.

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    No. Text is ugly and out of place.

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    lol, cumshot

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    I don't know dude but the recent picture looks like he has jizz in his face.

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